I hear ya... form over functionWhen you talk about lines and stuff you totally lose me, I'm a function over form kinda rider :| and for me either of those saddles would force me too far forward on the bike, which would make it less functional. Motorcycles that have a seat/tail like that would also have a longer fuel tank.
or you are way tiny then me and ride weird.
Here are two line mockups.
One w a smaller seat
Another w a front Cowl that would make that current seat fit the build.
Either way excited to see where you take it!